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e-mail to the dean of admissions. please critique!
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:01 pm
by lalalawya
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Re: e-mail to the dean of admissions. please critique!
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:04 pm
by Knock
lalalawya wrote:I meant with the dean of admissions for one of the schools I am applying to. He asked that I send him an e-mail once I have submitted my app so he can be "on the look-out" for it. I don't know what the standard etiquette is for this, so can you guys offer feedback? Thanks!
Hello Mr. XYZ,
Per our conversation this past July, I am writing to inform you that I have submitted my application to XXX law school. As I had previously mentioned to you, I have decided to apply through the early decision program. I look forward to you and your colleagues reviewing my application.
Best,
ABC
Per our conversation sounds a little bit too formal. I'd also add that you enjoyed talking to him, and then thank him for his time.
Re: e-mail to the dean of admissions. please critique!
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:07 pm
by lalalawya
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Re: e-mail to the dean of admissions. please critique!
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:09 pm
by Knock
lalalawya wrote:Is this better?
Hello Mr. XYZ,
As discussed in our meeting this past July, I am writing to inform you that I have submitted my application to XXX law school. As I had previously mentioned to you, I have decided to apply through the early decision program. I truly appreciate you taking the time to sit down to speak with me. Our conversation is really what cemented my interest in XXX.
I look forward to you and your colleagues reviewing my application.
Best,
ABC
Looks good to me!
ETA: I'd call him Dean XYZ, not Mr. XYZ.
Re: e-mail to the dean of admissions. please critique!
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:12 pm
by lalalawya
Good point. Thanks for your help!
Re: e-mail to the dean of admissions. please critique!
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:14 pm
by Knock
lalalawya wrote:Good point. Thanks for your help!
No problem, best of luck!
Re: e-mail to the dean of admissions. please critique!
Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:15 pm
by Jack Smirks
Knockglock wrote:lalalawya wrote:Good point. Thanks for your help!
No problem, best of luck!
BOOM
*high fives all around*