Feedback on my LOCI please:)
Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 10:06 am
I have been put on hold for further review at my school of choice. I want to send out a LOCI as soon as possible and appreciate any feedback on my first draft. I know there is a fine line between sounding assertive or desperate. Thanks for your help!
Dean X,
Thank you for considering my application for admission. I am writing to express my continued interest in X Law. The University of X college of Law is my first choice, and if offered a seat in your program I will definitely accept. I look forward to hearing from you soon-
Sincerely,
X
Dean X,
Thank you for considering my application for admission. I am writing to express my continued interest in X Law. The University of X college of Law is my first choice, and if offered a seat in your program I will definitely accept. I look forward to hearing from you soon-
Sincerely,
X