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another PS critique ( mostly grammar mistakes)

Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:43 pm
by caitriona
Sorry I would of feel much more comfortable to PM someone who will be willing to help. it's like 600 words PS.

Thanks a lot!

Re: another PS critique ( mostly grammar mistakes)

Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 12:30 pm
by Rocketman11
happy to help PM me