Hi anyone willing to give feedback on my PS? down to swap
Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2021 11:21 am
Hi, I'd appreciate if anyone could give feedback on my personal statement. I feel like I need the reaction of someone who doesn't know me 
In particular, I want to know if I come off as sincere and if there is anything that I should cut. I'd be happy to swap.

In particular, I want to know if I come off as sincere and if there is anything that I should cut. I'd be happy to swap.