Draft Personal Statement
Posted: Sun May 05, 2019 12:25 pm
This is a draft of my personal statement. Feedback is appreciated.
What makes a nation successful? It would be impossible to attribute success to one single cause, because it depends on a mix of a number of things: geography, availability of natural resources, the state of the infrastructure, the dominant economic model, and many other factors all play a role. One of these factors is a nation’s commitment to the rule of law. The rule of law affects whether a nation succeeds or not by promoting the conditions under which citizens can assume a basic standard of living and level of security that allow them to go about their lives. It protects a nation’s population in major ways, like guarding against government abuses of power, and minor ones, such as ensuring access to clean air and drinking water, among other necessities. Its absence or ineffectiveness undermines citizens’ trust in government and society while also making room for criminal actors to exploit its absence. I came to understand the importance of the rule of law comes from a combination of personal observations and wisdom gleaned from the works of prominent political theorists, each of which I will discuss in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
My previous career as an intelligence analyst took me to the war-ravaged countries of Iraq, Kosovo, and Afghanistan. Each of these nations taught me lessons that helped me better understand the necessity of the rule of law, primarily by getting a firsthand look at what happens to a nation when it functions poorly (or not at all.) In Iraq, I saw how replacing the rule of law with a despotic sovereign’s random whims warped society by turning citizens into sycophants and tainting institutions that would normally uphold the rule of law. In Kosovo, I witnessed how an atrophied and corruption-prone enforcement mechanism eroded the rule of law, in turn depriving the citizens of basic standards that protected and improved their health, safety, financial security, and quality of life. Examples of this include traffic laws that, while on the books, could easily be circumvented through knowing the “right” people or simple bribery; and the absence of a regulatory agency such as the EPA, which allowed a dirty coal power plant located in close proximity to Kosovo’s capital city to vent harmful gases into the same air that many citizens breathed daily. In Afghanistan, a weak central government combined with deep-seated tribal/ethnic rivalries created a “might makes right” form of government, where whoever had the most firepower exerted their will over the local population. Additionally, in all three of these nations, I observed how the absence of the rule of law allowed criminals and other bad actors to exploit this vacuum for personal gain.
My pursuit of a political science degree exposed me to the writings of Thomas Hobbes, Alexis de Tocqueville, John Locke, and John Stuart Mill, among others. Through their works, I gained greater insight into how the rule of law as a philosophical concept influences core elements of the American political system – such as the establishment of checks and balances, strict limits on governmental power, and an emphasis on the rights of the individual. I also explored some of the questions that the Founders grappled with, such as strong federal versus state governments.
I’m pursuing law school because I believe that an impartial and robust rule of law contributes to a nation’s success. I look forward to applying the lessons I’ve learned toward shaping and improving some small aspect of the United States legal code in a way that promotes the rule of law in a sound, impartial way – such as crafting fracking regulations that ensure citizens living near the sites still have clean drinking water or citizens’ Constitutional rights are not infringed upon. I wish to pursue my legal education at your school because [this section will be different for each school I apply to], and I hope you will allow me the opportunity to do so.
What makes a nation successful? It would be impossible to attribute success to one single cause, because it depends on a mix of a number of things: geography, availability of natural resources, the state of the infrastructure, the dominant economic model, and many other factors all play a role. One of these factors is a nation’s commitment to the rule of law. The rule of law affects whether a nation succeeds or not by promoting the conditions under which citizens can assume a basic standard of living and level of security that allow them to go about their lives. It protects a nation’s population in major ways, like guarding against government abuses of power, and minor ones, such as ensuring access to clean air and drinking water, among other necessities. Its absence or ineffectiveness undermines citizens’ trust in government and society while also making room for criminal actors to exploit its absence. I came to understand the importance of the rule of law comes from a combination of personal observations and wisdom gleaned from the works of prominent political theorists, each of which I will discuss in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
My previous career as an intelligence analyst took me to the war-ravaged countries of Iraq, Kosovo, and Afghanistan. Each of these nations taught me lessons that helped me better understand the necessity of the rule of law, primarily by getting a firsthand look at what happens to a nation when it functions poorly (or not at all.) In Iraq, I saw how replacing the rule of law with a despotic sovereign’s random whims warped society by turning citizens into sycophants and tainting institutions that would normally uphold the rule of law. In Kosovo, I witnessed how an atrophied and corruption-prone enforcement mechanism eroded the rule of law, in turn depriving the citizens of basic standards that protected and improved their health, safety, financial security, and quality of life. Examples of this include traffic laws that, while on the books, could easily be circumvented through knowing the “right” people or simple bribery; and the absence of a regulatory agency such as the EPA, which allowed a dirty coal power plant located in close proximity to Kosovo’s capital city to vent harmful gases into the same air that many citizens breathed daily. In Afghanistan, a weak central government combined with deep-seated tribal/ethnic rivalries created a “might makes right” form of government, where whoever had the most firepower exerted their will over the local population. Additionally, in all three of these nations, I observed how the absence of the rule of law allowed criminals and other bad actors to exploit this vacuum for personal gain.
My pursuit of a political science degree exposed me to the writings of Thomas Hobbes, Alexis de Tocqueville, John Locke, and John Stuart Mill, among others. Through their works, I gained greater insight into how the rule of law as a philosophical concept influences core elements of the American political system – such as the establishment of checks and balances, strict limits on governmental power, and an emphasis on the rights of the individual. I also explored some of the questions that the Founders grappled with, such as strong federal versus state governments.
I’m pursuing law school because I believe that an impartial and robust rule of law contributes to a nation’s success. I look forward to applying the lessons I’ve learned toward shaping and improving some small aspect of the United States legal code in a way that promotes the rule of law in a sound, impartial way – such as crafting fracking regulations that ensure citizens living near the sites still have clean drinking water or citizens’ Constitutional rights are not infringed upon. I wish to pursue my legal education at your school because [this section will be different for each school I apply to], and I hope you will allow me the opportunity to do so.