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Looking for critique on my PS - unique hobby

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2017 12:23 am
by konamiyoxi1
Hi, I am an international student currently on my master degree in an Ivy school. I also had an undergrad degree from a U.S. college.

I am looking for someone to critique my PS and to check my grammar. My PS is about a (somewhat) unique hobby and how it shaped my attitude/personality. Any comment / advice is very welcome! Thanks

Re: Looking for critique on my PS - unique hobby

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2017 12:14 pm
by Amerision
konamiyoxi1 wrote:Hi, I am an international student currently on my master degree in an Ivy school. I also had an undergrad degree from a U.S. college.

I am looking for someone to critique my PS and to check my grammar. My PS is about a (somewhat) unique hobby and how it shaped my attitude/personality. Any comment / advice is very welcome! Thanks
Happy to read, send it over.

Re: Looking for critique on my PS - unique hobby

Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2017 4:25 pm
by konamiyoxi1
Amerision wrote:
konamiyoxi1 wrote:Hi, I am an international student currently on my master degree in an Ivy school. I also had an undergrad degree from a U.S. college.

I am looking for someone to critique my PS and to check my grammar. My PS is about a (somewhat) unique hobby and how it shaped my attitude/personality. Any comment / advice is very welcome! Thanks
Happy to read, send it over.
PMed!