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Critique my PS?

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:22 pm
by ri.co
700 something words. Looking for 1. help cutting down length 2. confirmation if topic is satisfactory and effective. Send me a PM

Re: Critique my PS?

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:26 pm
by Platopus
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Re: Critique my PS?

Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2017 2:33 am
by ri.co
Platopus wrote:Happy to give it a read
Hey there. I tried sending you a PM but it seems to get stuck in my Outbox. Are you able to receive my messages? If not, can you send me a PM and see if that makes it possible for me to send to you? Thanks a ton!

Re: Critique my PS?

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2017 6:25 pm
by DorkothyParker
I can look it over. I finished mine so none to trade.