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PS statement swap

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2017 3:41 pm
by wannabegenius
Since I cannot tell who is still willing to swap statements, and who has finished editing, please comment on here if you are willing to swap with me. I am known among my friends to be a good editor ;) Disclaimer: Mine is a first draft. I am specifically looking for how to better phrase my last two paragraphs.

Re: PS statement swap

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2017 4:36 pm
by Hstrat
I'll swap my addendum for your PS, if you're willing. It's nearly a page long, I'm looking to shorten it. PM me if you want to swap

Re: PS statement swap

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2017 4:45 pm
by wannabegenius
Hstrat wrote:I'll swap my addendum for your PS, if you're willing. It's nearly a page long, I'm looking to shorten it. PM me if you want to swap
I'm down. Just adding a sentence to mine and I will send it over. Fair warning: it's rough.

Re: PS statement swap

Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2017 3:49 am
by 37beforeJD
I'll swap PSs. Mostly concerned about my topic and whether or not it reflects my qualities and capabilities clearly enough or requires too much reading between the lines.

Re: PS statement swap

Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2017 4:48 pm
by QUIZ
My draft is a bit long but I'd love any feedback that I could get and I'd be happy to offer my own for you in return. PM me and let me know if you're interested!