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As the title states, question about my PS. I honestly can't say that I have went through extreme hardship in my life. However, as my PS currently sits, I have spun it by using a life experience of getting injured and losing a sport I cared deeply about and was going to play in college as it made me lose my sense of identity, but then how through college I found my identity again in the form of my interest in law and how I will not allow myself to lose another passion again. Would love some feedback. Can post in thread/email a copy to someone to read if they desire and will swap with others.