Can someone please take a look at my first draft and see if I should pursue this theme?
Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2017 12:51 pm
I have written a VERY ROUGH first draft of my PS and I wanted to focus on being Biracial and kind of how that affected me growing up/ the person I am today. I'm not sure if my point has gotten across or if it may be coming off in a negative way or if it just doesnt flow at all! Is there anyone that could give it a proofread and let me know if I should continue on this path or abandon at all cost? I am desperate for some direction and pointers!
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!