There was an attempt
Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2017 8:50 pm
Generic splitter applicant to 5-18 or so.
I wrote a rough draft of a PS and kinda think it's too much and I should just totally throw it away and begin anew. Too political/too much of a stretch/too ranty/just too shit generally? Would appreciate someone critiquing either to confirm or disagree with my bad feeling about it.
I wrote a rough draft of a PS and kinda think it's too much and I should just totally throw it away and begin anew. Too political/too much of a stretch/too ranty/just too shit generally? Would appreciate someone critiquing either to confirm or disagree with my bad feeling about it.