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First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.
Posted: Thu Jul 13, 2017 10:36 am
by tuna_wasabi
I'm considering using this as a PS, but for now it's a DS.
Willing to swap or review your draft PS too.
Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.
Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2017 7:04 pm
by zkyggi
Will do. Send it over.
Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.
Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2017 10:34 pm
by Platopus
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Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.
Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2017 10:55 pm
by DowsingForAJD
I'm happy to trade too if you'd like another set of eyes.
Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.
Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2017 11:07 pm
by rosieposie12
Happy to trade, send it over!
Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.
Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2017 11:22 am
by tuna_wasabi
rosieposie12 wrote:Happy to trade, send it over!
DowsingForAJD wrote:I'm happy to trade too if you'd like another set of eyes.
Platopus wrote:Happy to trade, send it over
zkyggi wrote:Will do. Send it over.
Thanks guys! I decided to start over since I wasn't too happy with my writing style--hope you would not mind if I send it 2-3 weeks from now
Feel free to PM me yours for feedback in the meantime