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Final Draft PS...Anyone Interested in Reading?-deleted
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2016 12:06 am
by gytc
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Re: Final Draft PS...Anyone Interested in Reading?
Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2016 12:26 am
by JazzyMac
Have this on my "to read", I will get back with you soon.
Re: Final Draft PS...Anyone Interested in Reading?
Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2016 4:03 pm
by JazzyMac
Sorry I've taken so long to get back to you.
This is a very nice essay. It kept my attention the entire time, and the topic was interesting.
There is a sentence where you say you "worked hard for two weeks". I know what you meant, but I would remove that sentence from the essay. I think the assumption here is that you would work all the time, not just for two weeks.