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Can someone read my first paragraph of my PS and see if it's a good topic?

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 4:59 pm
by Persianlsnyc
I feel like it may be a little too dramatic but im not sure. Thank you so much! Will message to whoever wants.

Re: Can someone read my first paragraph of my PS and see if it's a good topic?

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 6:49 pm
by RictusErectus
Here to help!

Re: Can someone read my first paragraph of my PS and see if it's a good topic?

Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:05 pm
by kgm1990
RictusErectus wrote:Here to help!
Psh. This guy will just say it's "perfect in EVERY way."
;-) Just kidding (hopefully)