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Please delete. Thank you for the response.
Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:01 am
by zilliangirl
*POST REMOVED*
Re: PS. Critique Please - First Draft
Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:05 am
by t-14orbust
stopped reading at clavicle
Re: PS. Critique Please - First Draft
Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:19 am
by t-14orbust
merp
Re: PS. Critique Please - First Draft
Posted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:42 am
by zilliangirl
Thank you for your comments. They are very helpful. Please delete your post when possible. Thanks again.