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Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2016 9:57 pm
by Anonymous User
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Re: yale 250- Very fresh/raw so is it coming off as seeking sympathy?? Cliche? Self-centered?

Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2016 10:07 pm
by Germaine
Anonymous User wrote: As devastating as it is, I feel incredibly grateful ...
Dangling modifier.
Anonymous User wrote:to overtly show
Split infinitive.

Otherwise I thought it was fine.

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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2016 3:29 pm
by Anonymous User
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