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Anyone willing to review a 250?
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2016 12:42 am
by LittleGiants16
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Re: Anyone willing to review a 250?
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2016 12:49 am
by stig2014
I think it's good. Well written, shows one of your passions and also where you came from. I have to admit though, I'm probably slightly biased as I grew up playing golf and working at golf courses.
Re: Anyone willing to review a 250?
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2016 1:11 am
by gastronomy
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Re: Anyone willing to review a 250?
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2016 1:21 am
by hdunlop
Nitpicking since that's why you're here.
Your first semicolon should be a comma. I'm not sure about the last comma in the last sentence, maybe a dash. But I'm not as sure on that one.
Cheers to your town.