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Rough draft for your critique

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 10:24 am
by CharlesS
Could anybody take a look at my draft and offer your kind critique?
I want to just post it here, but it contains some sensitive information so I kinda have to PM to you.
Many, many thanks!

Re: Rough draft for your critique

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2015 12:03 pm
by nikey11!
I'd love to look at it for you. PM for email.