PS Second Draft - Comments/Criticism Welcomed Forum

[PhysicistLawyer]

If you're interested in seeing the progression of the PS:
-Here's my initial topic idea: http://www.top-law-schools.com/forums/v ... 8&t=257058
-Here's my first attempt at a PS: http://www.top-law-schools.com/forums/v ... 8&t=257067

I tried to include the advice provided to me in the previous threads.

As always, any thoughts or criticism is welcomed.

PS redacted.

[joeycxxxx09]

I commented on your last one. This is way better, I think you're pretty much good to go honestly. You connect the dots between yourself, physics, and law school, which is the purpose of a personal statement.