Need opinion on supplemental essay
Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2015 1:05 am
I have a complete draft of my supplemental essay for Michigan (essay 6). Before beginning, my idea seemed non-cliche and an effective way to answer the prompt. However, after writing, I am concerned about how a reader might receive the overall attitude/tone of the essay in a way I did not intend. Please PM me if you're able to read it--I will give more specific details about my concerns so you can tell me if they are warranted or not and provide other comments/advice.