PS help please? (PM)
Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:41 pm
Hey everyone
Long-time lurker here, first-time poster.
I just finished writing my PS and I'd love some critique. I'm more comfortable doing this through PM, so please send me a message if you are willing to help.
Thank you!

I just finished writing my PS and I'd love some critique. I'm more comfortable doing this through PM, so please send me a message if you are willing to help.
Thank you!