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ESL applicant need your critique! Thank you in advance!

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2015 4:44 am
by Anonymous User
ESL applicant really need your help!
Anyone who would like to critique my PS? I will PM it to you! Thx!

Re: ESL applicant need your critique! Thank you in advance!

Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:20 am
by Hand
No need to be shy, just post it here! Or just post your favorite parts? However, be sure to use "..." to indicate where you omitted parts so we don't get confused.