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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2015 4:08 am
by Anonymous User
Ok, thanks guys.
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2015 10:52 pm
by Anonymous User
Any thoughts guys? Worth working on further or scrap it?
Re: First Draft: Competitive Card Games / Martial Arts / Mock Trial
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2015 11:31 pm
by fats provolone
similar to what I told the esports guy, use it as a hook to get into your actual story about why you want to go to LS or at least to talk about yourself and what you're about rather than bragging about accomplishments
also hooly shit neckbeard trifecta right?
Re: First Draft: Competitive Card Games / Martial Arts / Mock Trial
Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2015 11:38 pm
by CanadianWolf
Scrap it. Doesn't paint a positive picture, in my opinion. I don't want to be rude, but it suggests a lack of maturity. Weak theme.