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So after reading tons of people's opinions, I decided that I would revise my personal statement rather than to write a new statement for this application cycle. I applied late last year, and was waitlisted and ultimately denied at the schools I applied to.

Anyway, If anyone is willing to read and critique my personal statement, I would much appreciate it!

I'll offer a brief critique if you PM it to me.

Thanks to CanadianWolf!

Would really appreciate at least one more reader, if anyone could!