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Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 8:39 pm
by heycharlie1
Ciao.

Re: Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:00 pm
by Stardust84
Have you worked on a particularly interesting assignment that was challenging? If so you could base your personal statement on that and tie it in with the analytical and research skills and how that makes you an ideal candidate for law school.

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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:05 pm
by pleadthafif
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Re: Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:05 pm
by lacrossebrother
I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?

Re: Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:07 pm
by heycharlie1
pleadthafif wrote:I'm a little confused, are you able to be diagnosed with vitiligo without showing symptoms? You said you were diagnosed when you were young but your PS reads like you're already an adult when the condition appears.
My error. I consider myself young two years ago.

I was diagnosed at 21.

Re: Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:08 pm
by heycharlie1
lacrossebrother wrote:I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?
I have not written it all yet. It's just a beginning, which was what I was hoping to get some feedback on. In the end, it will portray that.

Re: Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:11 pm
by lacrossebrother
heycharlie1 wrote:
lacrossebrother wrote:I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?
I have not written it all yet. It's just a beginning, which was what I was hoping to get some feedback on. In the end, it will portray that.
Why do you need help with the beginning? You don't want to waste the thirty minutes it'll take to tell a compelling story with a middle and an end of the beginning stinks?

Re: Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:14 pm
by heycharlie1
lacrossebrother wrote:
heycharlie1 wrote:
lacrossebrother wrote:I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?
I have not written it all yet. It's just a beginning, which was what I was hoping to get some feedback on. In the end, it will portray that.
Why do you need help with the beginning? You don't want to waste the thirty minutes it'll take to tell a compelling story with a middle and an end of the beginning stinks?
Lol.. Chill.

I don't know about you but to me the beginning and the ending are two of the most important parts. If you dont agree, that's fine. No need to bash on my question. Just don't reply.

Re: Just the beginning - Is it dumb to write about this? Please help! Thanks!

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:27 pm
by lacrossebrother
I'm just saying that you should probably write the whole thing out if you want decent criticism.