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AlexandraHope

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Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by AlexandraHope » Wed Sep 30, 2015 10:32 am

I have finally came to the conclusion that my old topic was not personal enough and that there was no way that I could realistically make it more personal.

After meeting today with my school's prelaw advisor, I had kind of a light bulb moment on a new topic. I am going to write about growing up during the recession, it's not that unique since most of my class will be around the same age. But I went through some hardships
(mother filed bankruptcy, was technically homeless, college fund was drained)
and i think it was one of reason's I unconsciously chose my major.


Can you guys give me some tips on pointers I should hit? Ways I can make it unique or ways that I could connect it to law?
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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by LSATclincher » Wed Sep 30, 2015 7:53 pm

Would not do this

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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by A. Nony Mouse » Wed Sep 30, 2015 7:58 pm

To be honest, if the idea is that this is a topic that is more personal to you, I'm not sure what kind of pointers other people can give you. It's about you, and we don't know you.

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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by AlexandraHope » Wed Sep 30, 2015 8:36 pm

LSATclincher wrote:Would not do this
Is there a specific reason?

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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by LSATclincher » Wed Sep 30, 2015 8:41 pm

AlexandraHope wrote:
LSATclincher wrote:Would not do this
Is there a specific reason?
For the reasons you stated -- it's not unique and every other candidate also grew up during the time period

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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by Scalvert » Wed Sep 30, 2015 10:27 pm

What was your original topic?

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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by AlexandraHope » Thu Oct 01, 2015 1:02 pm

Scalvert wrote:What was your original topic?
Hey, you actually edited my first statement. It was the one about my cousin and me supporting my cousin.

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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by Scalvert » Thu Oct 01, 2015 1:38 pm

AlexandraHope wrote:
Scalvert wrote:What was your original topic?
Hey, you actually edited my first statement. It was the one about my cousin and me supporting my cousin.
That's right, I remember. IIRC, it wasn't bad at all. I think the main criticism people had was there was more cousin than you. Were you not able to change the focus enough to make it work? I think the other posters are correct about this topic; I don't think it would help you at all.

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Re: Scrapping My Topic & Potential New Topic

Post by AlexandraHope » Thu Oct 01, 2015 2:09 pm

Scalvert wrote:
AlexandraHope wrote:
Scalvert wrote:What was your original topic?
Hey, you actually edited my first statement. It was the one about my cousin and me supporting my cousin.
That's right, I remember. IIRC, it wasn't bad at all. I think the main criticism people had was there was more cousin than you. Were you not able to change the focus enough to make it work? I think the other posters are correct about this topic; I don't think it would help you at all.
No, not really. It just felt disconnected and honestly, made me seem a little jerkish. Thank-you for your feedback though

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