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Hello,

I have two topics, and not sure which one is better.

I'm a few drafts though a personal statement about my career as a Ballet dancer and how I mentored younger dancers, and having retired am ready for a more professional career.

I also am a couple of drafts through one where I talk about my experience traveling throughout Europe for the last five years working as a legal assistant which has given me personal experience in international law.

Which topic to you is more unique and likely to get the Admissions to remember me and offer me a place?

Would be happy to swap personal statements, but know in advance that I've been out of school for a while so could really at best just give you an objective opinion if it stands out, reads well, and general comments. Also, I live in Europe so there will be an eight hour time difference. Thus, please be patient if it take a while to respond to your PM (will be at work or asleep probably).

Cheers!

I think the first sounds far more interesting.

If required to select one topic, I would choose the second. Regardless, you need to write draft & then eek comments.

CanadianWolf wrote:If required to select one topic, I would choose the second. Regardless, you need to write draft & then eek comments.

I've already written a draft for both. If you'd like to see them and decide from there PM me.

Both of those, are really unique statements. Can you somehow incorporate birth into the essay like a past, present, and future type of thing?

I'll read them & offer a brief critique if you PM them to me.

AlexandraHope wrote:Both of those, are really unique statements. Can you somehow incorporate birth into the essay like a past, present, and future type of thing?

Would like to, but with a 2-3 page limit I'm not sure how. Something to think about though!