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Please critique this PS -- Deleted

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 7:43 pm
by Anonymous User
Please do not quote.
Nope

Re: Please critique this PS

Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 8:47 pm
by Scalvert
I like it. It's not about you, and readers don't really learn anything about you personally, BUT it was well-written and interesting (to me, anyway). It shows also that you find learning about people (and looking through tons of documents) to be interesting work, so how could that not be in your favor? I could be very wrong, but I think it works.

Re: Please critique this PS

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 9:16 am
by Anonymous User
Thanks for your comments! I'm going to delete it now because I'm paranoid.

Re: Please critique this PS -- Deleted

Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2015 3:42 pm
by CanadianWolf
Too late. We already know.