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Rough Draft of PS
Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:07 pm
by CambrianExplosives
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I redid a few drafts tonight so this one is very out of date, and I'm going to go ahead and delete it.
Re: Rough Draft of PS
Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:39 pm
by Scalvert
I think the topic is fine. It could use a lot of editing -and maybe moving some information around within the essay- but if you're asking strictly about content, I think you're on the right track.
Re: Rough Draft of PS
Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2015 2:47 am
by CambrianExplosives
Scalvert wrote:I think the topic is fine. It could use a lot of editing -and maybe moving some information around within the essay- but if you're asking strictly about content, I think you're on the right track.
Thanks for that. I've gone ahead and changed quite a bit and will probably post the new one sometime in the near future for more edits.
