Can somebody read over my DS and PS ?
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 10:32 am
Thanks
Look in your PMs later this afternoon, I'll reply there.
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Re: Can somebody read over my DS and PS ?
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:19 am
I will make some edits
Look in your PMs later this afternoon, I'll reply there.
Look in your PMs later this afternoon, I'll reply there.
Re: Can somebody read over my DS and PS ?
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:27 am
Can you do that even if I am anonymous?
Re: Can somebody read over my DS and PS ?
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:29 am
I hadn't noticed that TBH. lol
PM me first (with your real username) and I'll send it in a reply.
PM me first (with your real username) and I'll send it in a reply.
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:31 am
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Re: Can somebody read over my DS and PS ?
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:40 am
Benwyatt- Thanks so much for your reply. I was actually worried about that, actually. If you have any ideas on how I can change or shift the direction that would be wonderful.
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 11:51 am
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Re: Can somebody read over my DS and PS ?
Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 1:20 pm
I PM'd the DS as well.
I think the first part of it works. The second part (while important) isn't really "unique" at all, though. (My grandmother was a single-parent school teacher as well, and some of the things my mom has told me are very similar to your situation.) I reworded the last part to sound as if the focus was more on your entire background than just the economic situation.
I haven't really looked into the DS too much, so someone else may be able to be of more help.
I think the first part of it works. The second part (while important) isn't really "unique" at all, though. (My grandmother was a single-parent school teacher as well, and some of the things my mom has told me are very similar to your situation.) I reworded the last part to sound as if the focus was more on your entire background than just the economic situation.
I haven't really looked into the DS too much, so someone else may be able to be of more help.
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Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 1:46 pm
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