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Critique my 250

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2015 7:02 pm
by thebestwes
I know it's a bit early, but I'm trying to hone my writing over the summer by doing it as much as possible, and I figure having multiple iterations of my Yale 250 to choose from can't hurt. PM me for the text.

Re: Critique my 250

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2015 7:31 pm
by CanadianWolf
I'll offer a brief critique if you PM it to me.