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Thank you very much for that reply, you don't know how much that input might help in putting me in a law school that I might be on the verge of getting in, In my resume I listed my experiences as a basic training platoon leader and an airborne school chalk leader. I also was in charge of officers in this positions. Do you think i should put in my PS?

The family part was meant to explain why I haven't done many EC activities. I just started tutoring though. I suppose I could add that?

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Your revision is even worse.

HRomanus wrote:Your revision is even worse.

U mad bruh? I see this site has sapped your spirit, you'll be alright bro. You either die a spongebob or live long enough to see yourself become a squidward, stick that quote in your ps, lmao

alaird21 wrote:

HRomanus wrote:Your revision is even worse.

U mad bruh? I see this site has sapped your spirit, you'll be alright bro. You either die a spongebob or live long enough to see yourself become a squidward, stick that quote in your ps, lmao

Hahaha holy shit.

lol. considering my numbers are both above the 75th percentiles, i think i'll be ok. being a paralegal for a year seems terrible lol

hypothetically, if you were to kill yourself, what would happen to your trust fund?

fats provolone wrote:hypothetically, if you were to kill yourself, what would happen to your trust fund?

two year old daughter gets it

alaird21 wrote:

fats provolone wrote:hypothetically, if you were to kill yourself, what would happen to your trust fund?

two year old daughter gets it

My dad made sure to protect it from wives when he set it up

In all seriousness, was the revision really worse? I hate this kind of stuff.

alaird21 wrote:

alaird21 wrote:

fats provolone wrote:hypothetically, if you were to kill yourself, what would happen to your trust fund?

two year old daughter gets it

My dad made sure to protect it from wives when he set it up

that's hilarious. is he a lawyer?

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alaird21 wrote:In all seriousness, was the revision really worse? I hate this kind of stuff.

alaird21 wrote:U mad bruh? I see this site has sapped your spirit, you'll be alright bro. You either die a spongebob or live long enough to see yourself become a squidward, stick that quote in your ps, lmao

fats provolone wrote:

alaird21 wrote:

alaird21 wrote:

fats provolone wrote:hypothetically, if you were to kill yourself, what would happen to your trust fund?

two year old daughter gets it

My dad made sure to protect it from wives when he set it up

that's hilarious. is he a lawyer?

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yessir, midlaw

In all honesty, I think much of your PS might be better used in a diversity statement. I didn't learn much about why you would be a good law student (other than that you have overcome adversity) and you did a lot of telling rather than showing. Like someone said above, the part about you leaving makes you sound more like a quitter than anything else and it doesn't come across like I am sure you intend.

You might consider picking a more specific moment/life experience to discuss. I think it would be better than trying to give a life narrative like you did here. Additionally, the whole essay is written a little too casually. Writing a PS is tough, I know. Keep at it.

he's dead now, hence trust

hillz wrote:In all honesty, I think much of your PS might be better used in a diversity statement. I didn't learn much about why you would be a good law student (other than that you have overcome adversity) and you did a lot of telling rather than showing. Like someone said above, the part about you leaving makes you sound more like a quitter than anything else and it doesn't come across like I am sure you intend.

You might consider picking a more specific moment/life experience to discuss. I think it would be better than trying to give a life narrative like you did here. Additionally, the whole essay is written a little too casually. Writing a PS is tough, I know. Keep at it.

That makes sense.

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alaird21 wrote:U mad bruh? I see this site has sapped your spirit, you'll be alright bro. You either die a spongebob or live long enough to see yourself become a squidward, stick that quote in your ps, lmao

http://www.top-law-schools.com/forums/v ... 0&t=239843

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