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Is someone up for reading my first paragraph?

Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2014 9:58 am
by erictheangel
Yes, that's right. I'm not going to shnorer anyone's time. All I am interested in is having someone reading a mere paragraph to tell me if wording is good and if it sets up an appropriate PS topic. Please let me know.

Re: Is someone up for reading my first paragraph?

Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2014 12:36 pm
by solitarymatch
I'm in!

But I will get back to you in the evening with feedback. On my lunch break.