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proofread my addendum please?

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2014 6:39 pm
by Anonymous User
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Re: C&F addendum critique please!

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2014 7:16 pm
by criminaltheory
Looks good. Personally I'm curious about why you were found not-responsible, but unless there's a great reason you were actually not responsible I wouldn't go into further detail about it. If you were let off on a technicality or something, this is all you need.

That said, you switch between 'accountable' and 'responsible' in the explanation. Use whatever the formal adjudication was.

Re: C&F addendum critique please!

Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:14 pm
by Anonymous User
oh good catch! i'll be sure to fix that!

anybody else, comments/thoughts/suggestions?

Re: C&F addendum critique please!

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2014 9:11 pm
by Anonymous User
bump

should i shorten it? i don't want to be too wordy