Top Law Schools

Would anyone be interested in critiquing my PS or swapping PS's?

Topic: How greed can lead to the progressive degradation of the healthcare system.

Edit: topic is actually how I learned that greed can lead to the progressive degradation of society through my experiences in the healthcare industry and how that stimulated my interest in medical law.

I believe the PS is supposed to be about you, not necessarily your thoughts on a particular issue.

Post removed.

I should have been more specific, the essay is about how I learned that greed can lead to the progressive degradation of society through my experiences working at a pharmacy that was under dea investigation and shadowing a urologist who's peers were involved in malpractice suits for treating patients unnecessarily for disease states that are more effectively approached through routine monitoring.

I don't talk about law in the essay except for in how it's relevant to my career goals. The essay itself is more of a discussion of ethical issues I encountered in the healthcare system