looking for advice on this draft, i think it's almost there
Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:57 am
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Re: looking for advice on this draft, i think it's almost there
Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 1:53 pm
You need someone to check your grammar for sure. The whole miscarriage story is way too long. Your conviction made you sound like a fanatic rather than a reasonable person seeking change.
Re: looking for advice on this draft, i think it's almost there
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2014 1:04 am
I second that! Grammar is a consistent issue in this write up.. Poor grammar can be repelling 