Another rate my PS thread. Anyone? Forum
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Anonymous User
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Another rate my PS thread. Anyone?
thx
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HRomanus
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Re: Another rate my PS thread. Anyone?
Way too fragmented. I was confused as hell at the transition between mentoring children and "I gave up after half a mile." Pick one experience and flesh it out.
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Chrstgtr
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Re: Another rate my PS thread. Anyone?
I would not bring attention to any history of mental instability.
This is also all over the place. It seems like you are throwing out a bunch of cliches hoping that one sticks and makes the whole PS work.
This is also all over the place. It seems like you are throwing out a bunch of cliches hoping that one sticks and makes the whole PS work.
