PS Final-After incorporating your suggestions! Any thoughts? Forum
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Re: PS Final-After incorporating your suggestions! Any thoughts?
MUCH better! It seems a little long though- is this within page limit?
I would try reading it aloud to for flow, but otherwise, much improved! Congrats!
I would try reading it aloud to for flow, but otherwise, much improved! Congrats!
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Re: PS Final-After incorporating your suggestions! Any thoughts?
Thank you for all of your feedback. I made a few additional edits after I read it aloud. It is within page limit for the majority of the schools I am applying to (2-3 pages). However I need to cut it down to two pages for others. Again, thank you!!