Two versions, could really use some input!
Posted: Sat Dec 28, 2013 6:54 pm
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Honestly I don't find either of them overly compelling. I think what is lacking is a real picture of who you are aside from the guy in the middle of arguments. That said, option 2 was better for me because it didn't go too far into the details that don't matter (i.e. your friend's names that were having the argument).
Good luck!