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Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2013 2:54 pm
by Anonymous User
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Re: DS, trying to send this out today..how does it look?
Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2013 6:40 am
by jabberwocky_phlegm
just my opinion, but I think the last sentence is kind of implied by the fact that you're writing a DS.
Re: DS, trying to send this out today..how does it look?
Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2013 11:56 pm
by lawschool2014hopeful
fairly weak/obvious PS. It tell me nothing other than what I will already know. You are an immigrant, and you went to different schools. You didnt provide any examples as to how you suffered/overcame those cultural differences other than an "eventually"