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Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2013 2:47 pm
by jac101689
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Re: Whadda y'all think?
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2013 2:54 pm
by lawschool2014hopeful
This statement does not any sort of logical progression. After reading the first 2 paragraphs I had no idea what the purpose of the statement was or any of the information provided. It honestly just seems like a long ramble, go back to the drawing board and clarify the purpose of your statement.
Re: Whadda y'all think?
Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2013 2:59 pm
by jac101689
Do you think any part of it is worth preserving?