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Adversity/Diversity Essay.. Please critique/advise

Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2013 4:26 pm
by luuma
thanks

Re: Adversity/Diversity Essay.. Please critique/advise

Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2013 5:02 pm
by lawschool2014hopeful
Everything you wrote is pretty solid, until we get to the ending, your conviction of law. Claims like how law encompass every aspect of our life, is generic, brief, and not compelling for why you want to go law school.

Re: Adversity/Diversity Essay.. Please critique/advise

Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2013 5:39 pm
by luuma
How would you propose I better refine it without dwelling to deep into another topic?

Re: Adversity/Diversity Essay.. Please critique/advise

Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2013 9:38 pm
by lawschool2014hopeful
luuma wrote:How would you propose I better refine it without dwelling to deep into another topic?
Simple, you do.