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First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2013 4:32 am
by Anonymous User
Thank you for all your help.
Re: First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
Posted: Wed Nov 06, 2013 8:07 pm
by Anonymous User
*bump* anyone?
Re: First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
Posted: Thu Nov 07, 2013 12:22 am
by lawschool2014hopeful
I dont see how this makes you diverse unfortunately. You turned a possible diversity statement into a typical immigrant/challenge story, which would be more appropriated for your PS. I think you should focus more, with details your experiences at Sri Lanka, your transition difficulties, and how those experiences shaped you as a person.
Re: First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
Posted: Thu Nov 07, 2013 4:41 pm
by Anonymous User
thank you for the feedback jimmierock.