First draft DS, any help would be appreciated Forum
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First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
Thank you for all your help.
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Re: First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
*bump* anyone?
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Re: First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
I dont see how this makes you diverse unfortunately. You turned a possible diversity statement into a typical immigrant/challenge story, which would be more appropriated for your PS. I think you should focus more, with details your experiences at Sri Lanka, your transition difficulties, and how those experiences shaped you as a person.
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Re: First draft DS, any help would be appreciated
thank you for the feedback jimmierock.
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