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Very FIRST rough draft - Feminism
Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 7:48 pm
by luuma
thanks
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 9:55 pm
by westjr
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Re: Very FIRST rough draft - Feminism
Posted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:11 pm
by blsingindisguise
I agree you could shorten the part about the family past/grandmother, but I wouldn't cut too much because I think it's compelling and it comes through that these family stories are important to you and part of your identity.