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This will sound harsh, but from one Asian kid to another, don't make the same mistake every other Asian did does...

I hope you're planning to submit this as a diversity statement, because that's how it reads. Put some action in there; witnessing does not count as an action and beliefs/reflections are even cheaper than words. Your grades/lsat must be stellar if you're going to make a statement like this:

As an attorney, I know that I will help people in a very important way--one in which everyday people of modest means are lifted up and empowered to be treated equally through the lens of the law. From there, I hope to and would help build integration in Los Angeles.

and by stellar I mean Stanford Law is not a reach for you. Also, the last 6 paragraphs hint that you were once a pre-med but for one reason or another decided to switch to law. If that's true and your resume suggests as much, find a way to explain it quickly. Law schools really hate serving as a last resort for medical school escapees/rejects.

Thanks Anastasia Dee Dualla and chinadoll for your feedback. My feelings aren't hurt in any way. Thankfully this is an early draft. Appreciate the help!

Seems like OP wants the quotes gone since they deleted their comment