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I'm ready, comments and crits please

Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2013 12:29 pm

by onionskin

derp

Re: I'm ready, comments and crits please

Posted: Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:04 pm

by Jack86

the last sentence should be want to become, not wanted. ill reread it and give some better feedback