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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:42 am
by hyang1021
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Re: SUBMITTING TONIGHT - Please critique!!

Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 5:05 pm
by biggemflowers
Do not have GOD in all caps in that last bit. Get rid of that immediately. Sounds like you are pushing it on me.