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C&F critique and advice (will help in return)

Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 5:38 pm
by Anonymous User
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Re: C&F critique and advice (will help in return)

Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 10:15 pm
by Anonymous User
Please someone...

Re: C&F critique and advice (will help in return)

Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 11:55 pm
by bluepenguin
Anonymous User wrote:As a juvenile, I was cited twice for disorderly conduct. I'm not sure about this comma. If you're not either you can scour OWL or put "as a juvenile" at the end. Both offenses happened within a six month period. I'm not sure why you have that detail. I don't know much about C&F but it strikes me you should either give the exact dates or leave this out altogether. As an immature teenager, I was associating myself with the wrong people. I took responsibility for my actions and paid the fine for the citation. Anything else? Probation? Community service? Both of the offenses have been expunged from my record.

When I was twenty years old, I was cited for a minor in consumption of alcohol. I was walking home from a friend’s house when I was stopped and asked to take a Breathalyzer. I admitted that I was drinking and was fully cooperative. I was placed into a diversionary program and the offense was removed from my record.



Am I supposed to put more details about the disorderly conducts? I requested the docket transcript and the only thing listed is the charge of disorder conduct hazardous/ phsyi off. There is no details about the events and I would rather not specify.