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Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:32 am
by Anonymous User
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Re: Please Edit PS!
Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:41 am
by laxbrah420
nevermind
Re: Please Edit PS!
Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2012 3:42 am
by bluepenguin
The writing is technically good, but just somewhat inelegant, particularly after the second paragraph. The conclusion is very weak. You could just ditch it for schools that accept purely personal statements. Otherwise you'll need to address why law school is a logical step for you more convincingly.